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Reading Like a Writer

6/28/2016

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It’s time once again for another update in my year-long experiment of living (actually reading) fictionally. Except in this case after five fiction books in a row, I decided to tackle one book on the art of writing. More specifically, Francine Prose’s excellent Reading Like a Writer. Prose (whose name almost automatically makes her qualified to pen such a book) is the author of numerous novels herself, and this nonfiction work is an attempt by her to distill some of the knowledge about understanding fiction she has gained over the years. I found it to be a very helpful book, and one that will stick with me for some time. I would recommend this one for any of you out there who are trying to become a better writer because it certainly gave me a ton of new insights. I came away from this book with a new appreciation for many writers, including the Russian playwright and author Anton Chekhov, whom Prose uses in a final chapter to illustrate how a writer can attempt to become a completely dispassionate observer. While I’m not entirely convinced I can set aside my emotions in such an extreme manner, I definitely want to read more of this guy’s work.

As usual, I want to dive into a few major lessons on writing that I was able to take away from this book, but obviously this will be a bit different from the others.

  1. The importance of the “close read.” Prose opens the book with a series of chapters on words, sentences, and paragraphs, and introduced me to new ways of really looking at the various parts of each novel I read. As she writes in the book, words are the basic tools of our craft, and it’s very important how we use them. Within each of these chapters are various excerpts of short stories and novels that Prose deftly uses to explain what she means, and I found each of the beginning chapters very informative. While I have tried to apply a close read to each novel I’ve taken on in this experiment, I found new and different ways to try this technique and to also apply it to my own writing.
  2. There really are no “rules” to writing. This is a theme Prose hits throughout the book, listing examples of how some writers do things only to present counterexamples on the next page (which apparently is also how she taught her classes). Simply put, all those things you learned in your English classes, while important, are not all going to be necessary to find your voice. While you still should follow a guide such as Strunk & White to make sure your mechanics are correct, don’t be afraid to play around with language as the greats did. Prose uses authors I didn’t know much about, including Heinrich Von Kleist, to show how various authors break the rules of description and character development and still come away with a fantastic, gripping tale. As I’ve stated elsewhere, reading advice on how to write can only take you so far. It was refreshing to hear someone with the experience of Prose admit to what most writers seem to naturally understand: you will never be able to find your voice unless you allow it to break free of what you were taught through your school years. As hard as this might seem to accomplish, if you lessen your fear of doing so it will be within your grasp.

There is a lot more to be said about this book that I am not going to cover here, but I would highly recommend it for anyone who loves reading and would like to become a writer themselves. I know it is going to assist me immensely as I tackle the second-half of my reading list for this experiment. (Prose also includes a hefty list of reading recommendations at the end of the book, many of which I hope to get to someday.)

And speaking of my reading list for the second-half of the year...thanks to all of you for the excellent book suggestions! Unfortunately I was not able to include all of them for this year, but don’t fret; I am strongly considering pushing this experiment into next year, so much has it helped me as a writer thus far. I also hope to be able to pursue a few other experiments regarding short stories and some other stuff this year. But without further ado, here are the titles I will be tackling through December:

A Thousand Acres - Jane Smiley
Fight Club - Chuck Palahniuk
The Sound and the Fury - William Faulkner
Exodus - Leon Uris
Neuromancer - William Gibson
Bird by Bird - Anne Lamott

Again, thank you very much for all the recommendations. I hope to be able to fit many more fiction books in my life over the next few years, and it helps to be connected to so many readers! I will return to this space shortly for my next essay, as well as branching out into the territory of the short story, continuing the path to publication, and offering more info on my next novel.

Stay tuned, and as always, thanks for reading!​
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Life Lessons

6/24/2016

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It’s been almost a year since I lost my previous office job, spent a month in the wilderness of unemployment, and found a much better position working at a used book store. In that time I have come to know some important lessons about life and writing that I’d like to share. I did something similar at the end of last year, but this list is a more thorough compilation. In the interest of keeping the list manageable, I’ve attempted to keep it as pithy as possible. And if any of you out there have your own lessons to add, feel free to do so in the comments. Thanks for reading!
  1. Whatever occupies your day must be worthwhile. Do not ever waste eight hours of your day working a job that you know is not contributing anything to your life.
  2. Along these lines: don’t ever waste your life. Don’t make the same mistake I did of looking back on the last seven years of employment and realizing what a giant pointless excursion it was. Yes, I got a great story out of it (more on that later) but accessing that part of my brain to tell it means I have to keep remembering these decisions that I made and what came of them. Better to just not waste the time in the first place.
  3. Read a lot. One year prior I would have said this should include a healthy dose of non-fiction and regular news, as an informed citizen should, but now I’m not so sure. A year of reading nothing but fiction each night has brought some much needed clarity to my life. I still make time for about an hour of non-fiction reading each day, but that’s it.
  4. If you feel you’ve taken on too much in your life, learn to let go. It will make things immeasurably less frustrating. In the past year I’ve quit one neighborhood board, almost completely stopped writing journalism, and taken some other steps toward simplification. And I feel my life has been better for it.
  5. Take care of debt, before it gets out of control.
  6. This goes for emotional baggage, too. If you’ve hit your third decade and aren’t constantly examining your life and what you’re doing, then why not? Change is essential.
  7. Get enough sleep. A day spent wired on caffeine is not the same as eight hours of restful slumber.
  8. Enjoy what you do. If this is true, you’ll be able to work for long periods of time without realizing it.
  9. Don’t be afraid to disconnect: from social media, your smart phone, and the online news-o-sphere. I obsessed over that stuff for years during my day job, and since I have much enjoyed spending time away from it. You probably can never fully disconnect (not with Trump running around), but try to do as little as possible.
  10. Discovering yourself as a writer will take a lifetime. Make sure you’ve given yourself the space to do so.
  11. Work every day on having a Zen-like mood about your life. It will help you enjoy life much more. Enjoy the pleasantry of every moment, because each one of them contains everything you need around you. Try to recall this as much a possible.
  12. Find love. I cannot stress this enough. If you can find somebody who loves you for the person you are, you’ve accomplished a lot. I know I have.
  13. Along those lines: don’t be afraid of the person you are, or the person you have become. Change is the nature of our lives, and if we resist we are doomed to failure.
  14. There isn’t much else to life outside of relationships, where you choose to put down roots, and what you do with your life. Everything else is going to be largely outside of your control, but you can learn to accept this, even graciously. Just be mindful of it every day, and it will start to become inured in your consciousness.
  15. Life is not about making money. Anyone who tells you isn’t giving you a full shake. Life is about the experience, and maybe making deeper connections with your fellow humans once in a while. Don’t ever forget this.​
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Fahrenheit 451

5/26/2016

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It is time once again for another entry in my year-long experiment in living (actually reading) fiction. In the interest of keeping these intros short, I’ll recap that my literary travails this year have encompassed everything from mystery to science fiction, and I have pulled major lessons about writing from each work. The last novel of this first round was no exception: Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451, one of the best-known examples of dystopian science fiction, which is becoming one of my favorite genres. I know I said similar things about Vonnegut’s Slaughterhouse Five, but once again I was completely blown away by this work and consider it possibly the finest piece of fiction I’ve read in my short life. Bradbury’s use of language to describe this futuristic, ignorant world is fraught with incredible prescience. Each sentence is crafted tautly and conveys miles beyond just what the words say. Overall I would say this encompasses the two major lessons I learned from the reading of this masterpiece:

  1. Writing a book about books. It seems simplistic, but this is the only example of this type of writing that I’ve come across to date. Beyond all the other themes of this book, Bradbury was most concerned with the passing on of information. This novel is a celebration of the written word, and Bradbury takes great pains in the characters’ dialogue to describe what has happened to society to make the concept of learning almost obsolete. Nowhere else is this better understood than in the characters we meet at the end of the book: a group of over-educated (for this universe) men who have taken to memorizing books, rather than daring to have the physical things around to be burned by the firemen. Conversely this is also implemented well by the main antagonist, Captain Beatty, who delivers long diatribes against books but ultimately begs to be killed by the main character, possibly because of what he knows he has done to his world.
  2. Using a novel to tell truths about society. This is a more general theme that I have discussed, especially concerning The Picture of Dorian Gray, but I wanted to return to it here as this is where the book became even more impactful for me. Recall that Bradbury wrote this book, which features flat-screen televisions, in-ear headphones and a vicious electronic animal-type device that hunts down its prey, in the early Fifties. Not only was he railing against the dumbing down of the McCarthyites, but also predicting where our society was heading as things like television were one-tenth the size of those that appear in the novel. Bradbury was spot-on in seeing how other forms of 20th century media would begin to crowd out literary works, and deftly uses this as an allegory of the importance of reading to gain knowledge. This book is the best example I have come across of using this genre to speculate about where our species is heading, and has become an eerily prescient guide to our current age.

There are plenty of other lessons to draw upon from this novel, but I’m guessing many of you have read this one and seen your own parallels to our world. If not, I can’t recommend this book highly enough as it has affected me tremendously, and in ways I’m still figuring out. Plus it is a great example of how to pack the sentences of a fairly short book with meaning - each one entails much more than the sum of its words, making this a book worth paying deep attention to each time you read it.


Well, that’s it for the first round of fiction in this experiment. Up next is a book on writing itself: Francine Prose’s Reading Like a Writer. I’ll write an essay on that and also present the list of books that will encompass the second half of my year. Stay tuned for more updates on my year of living (actually reading) fictionally!
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The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo

5/15/2016

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It’s time once more for an update in my year of living (actually) reading fictionally. To recap, I’ve tackled everything from 19th-Century literature to a cat mystery novel, and each selection has given me few important ways to improve my writing. The fifth book in this year-long experiment was The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo, by Swedish crime novelist Stieg Larsson. This was another attempt to read a mystery novel, but I never expected to be so compelled by the work that I could barely put it down. I won’t give away much of the amazingly and intricately detailed plot, but I will say that it’s is a taut psychological thriller that delves deep into societal themes such as violence against women, corporate illegality, hacking, investigative journalism, and family dynastic issues that turn horribly ugly. It was a fantastic read and it’s going to take some restraint not to jump immediately into the next book of the Millennium trilogy.

Now, to some of the major lessons I learned about writing from this work.

  1. Writing like a journalist. This is something I’ve shied away from since my first novel, mostly because I worried that my non-fiction style was cramping my fictional efforts. After reading this book, however, I am more convinced that this style isn’t necessarily a bad thing. Larsson gives us all the facts we need and keeps the language realistic, yet despite the less than florid language the main characters felt very alive to me. Mikael Blomkvist, the investigative journalist, is an exciting presence to follow as he pulls on the various strands of the Vanger family legacy, and despite having to make some incredible moral concessions still comes off as complex. Lisbeth Salander is one of the most complex characters I’ve ever read and one I want to find out more about through the course of the rest of the books in this series. Both of these characters are not described any more than necessary, and it works well for the drama of the story.
  2. Planning out the plot. This became more obvious to me as the story went along. While Larsson does tie up many loose ends of the narrative there is still quite a bit that we don’t know about the backstory of these characters that he obviously meant to include in the next books. This points to an important role of the storyteller: make sure you know where you’re going with the plot. I can relate a personal struggle to this one, as I worked on my second novel (Last Man on Campus) without much thinking on how the story would end overall. While this got me a decent twist to use toward the finale, I was left with a story that just “stopped” and will need a sequel (someday). If I had done more planning on the overall story I could have better dealt with this issue. Larsson sets up a world for these characters to inhabit in which a lot has already taken place, and at the end there is a fairly large wedge placed between Blomkvist and Salander that will have to be resolved if they are going to work together on later cases. Besides this are the sophisticated plot details Larsson must have planned out regarding the mysteries surrounding the Vanger family, which the author obviously pondered a lot as he was working on this story. The main lesson here: don’t be afraid to really think out your plot to the end of the road, even if the final product doesn’t quite match your expectations.

Overall I enjoyed reading this novel and at times struggled to put it down, so intensely interested was I in the mystery. I feel like I understand the genre even better after reading this book, and would definitely recommend it for people who like to be shocked or are interested in the more societal topics Larsson takes on within the work.

Up next will be the final book of the first half of this experiment, and one I’m embarrassed to say I’ve never read: Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451. Then I will tackle one book on writing, and return in the second half with a more recommendation-based list of titles which I’ll post at that time. Stay tuned for more updates on my year of living (actually reading) fictionally!
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Slaughterhouse Five

3/23/2016

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It’s time once more for the fourth update in my year-long experiment of living (actually reading) fictionally. For those of you keeping score at home, the first book I tackled was Oscar Wilde’s fascinating 19th century novel The Picture of Dorian Gray. Next was Ernest Hemingway’s Pulitzer Prize-winning 1952 novel The Old Man and the Sea, followed by my first ever cat mystery novel in Lillian Jackson Braun’s The Cat Who Played Post Office. For book number four I decided to take on a novelist who I’m sorry to say I had not read up to this point: Kurt Vonnegut and what is considered his greatest work, Slaughterhouse Five.

Despite previous essays on this experiment shying away from delving into the plot or narrative of the books I’ve been reading, I feel little bit of gushing is required. This may very well be the best novel I’ve ever read. This may be due to the paucity of titles I have gotten to over the years, but I feel I can state this with some confidence. Vonnegut’s use of simple language combined with the post-modern satirical nature of the entire work combine to make a powerful indictment of our violent humanity and how we react to the violence of our age. The short, clipped sentences reminded me of Hemingway, while the overall caustic commentary on warfare was more Joseph Heller, and yet Vonnegut weaves a story that is completely his own. I came away from this book seeing almost everything in my universe differently, which is what I’m looking for in each work I delve into, and I was immensely satisfied with the statement Vonnegut was trying to make.

Digging down more into the writing takeaways from this book, I would say there are two:
  1. Use of repetition. Vonnegut’s use of repetition, almost exclusively after mentioning some kind of death, is masterful. While you might think that reading the same phrase (“so it goes,” which according to Wikipedia shows up 106 times) would get annoying, in fact somehow the author uses it to repeatedly hit you over the head about how little we as humans seemed to care about death in the 20th century. It’s a bizarre little mix of humor and horror, and is used deftly to create a sense of anesthesia against the very dark subject matter while simultaneously making you consider each instance on a deeper level.
  2. Injection of Science Fiction elements into any story. While Vonnegut is apparently known as a SciFi writer, for me that wasn’t the major element of this book. While this book stands supreme as an anti-war novel, Vonnegut goes above and beyond that with his references to time travel and alien cultures, all in service of immense story lines about humanity and how we perceive time, violence, and each other. The simple matter of the protagonist, Billy Pilgrim, being “unstuck in time” allows the narrative to fly literally anywhere, from the deepest recesses of space to various points between his birth and death, and allows us to consider just how important it is to even tell a story in a linear fashion. The alien beings Pilgrim meets can view time as a fourth-dimensional construct, one of many mind-blowing notions within the book that help us see the story unfold from various angles.

​In short, while I am ashamed it took me this long to get to such a monumental author’s work, I can say without a doubt that reading anything by this man will improve your writing. An absolute joy of a novel to read, it also is an epic yarn that ought to rattle your perceptions of time, the universe, and our own human nature. I would highly recommend this book to anyone, and hope to continue reading more of Vonnegut’s work throughout the years.

Up next in the experiment I return to the mystery genre, this time tackling a book I have wanted to read for years: Stieg Larsson's The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo. There are only a few books remaining on my list before I start working in some recommendations from you all out there. If you still want to give me your list, feel free to shoot me an email or comment on this here bloggy. And stay tuned for the next exciting installment in my year of living (actually reading) fictionally.​
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The Cat Who Played Post Office

3/6/2016

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It’s time for the third update in my year-long experiment in living (actually reading) fictionally. For those of you keeping score at home, the first book I tackled was Oscar Wilde’s fascinating 19th century novel The Picture of Dorian Gray. Next was Ernest Hemingway’s Pulitzer Prize-winning 1952 novel The Old Man and the Sea. Now I have switched gears, turning to a book my wife suggested, Lillian Jackson Braun’s 1988 novel The Cat Who Played Post Office.

I will be the first to admit I never thought I would read a mystery series, let alone one whose main mystery-solvers are a pair of Siamese cats and their owner, Jim Qwilleran. But part of my learning experience over the past year has been opening myself up to new concepts, one of which was trying to understand various niches and where my own writing might fit in among them. As usual, I won’t get too much into the plot or give away the ending, but I will say that this was a very engaging novel and Braun creates a world, albeit a few books into the series (which originally started in the Sixties) that I enjoyed jumping into each time I sat with the work. This leads to the first point about writing I wanted to observe.

  1. Keeping reader interest. Braun had me hooked from the beginning of this book: the main character suffers a bicycle accident, and the reader is right there with him as he regains his memory and recalls the people in his life. I thought this was an excellent way of helping readers get caught up with the universe, even if they haven’t read other books in this series. More than this, the writing is very engaging and witty, and though the author introduces a lot of characters (and potential suspects) throughout the book, she imbues each with a funny small-town charm that I recognized from my days living in rural Iowa. She also keeps the clues, found by the curiosity of the main character’s cats, coming so that I was always speculating about the murders that were taking place throughout the story. This is another lesson that seems simple but is of the utmost importance if you are hoping to become a popular author. Yes, it’s a series of cat mystery novels, but it’s one that existed for decades and had a strong enough fanbase to keep selling. Ensuring that your writing is retaining the reader’s interest at all times is an important part of the process behind your drafts, and something we as writers should never stray too far from as we work.
  2. Reading for pleasure. This concept had almost become a lost art within my psyche as I had not considered reading a book for the simple pleasure of it in some time. While this book was a great read and I did enjoy it, I would also have to say it was a welcome antidote after the two heavier philosophical novels I took on at the beginning of this experiment. This was key for me simply to break up the deep thinking that was taking place in my mind as I read those two masterworks. I don’t know that I will ever return to this series, but it’s nice to know it and others like it exist for when I do want to tune into some “light” reading material. Just remember, this stuff is popular for a reason and can be a good source to provoke your mind, even if you consider it not “true” literary fiction. Keeping an open mind is what we writers are supposed to do, after all.
  3. Make sure your “hook” catches people. This is a point more specific to the genre, but does kind of tie into the previous lessons. Braun really understands the relationship a cat owner can come to have with their pets, and uses that to create some dynamic scenes involving the Siamese locating clues for Qwill, the main character. This meshing of the cats and their moustache-endowed owner is a “hook” that catches readers and keeps them engaged in the clues to the mystery, and is an idea that has been quite popular within the genre for decades. Christie had Poirot, and today’s equivalent might be Lee Child’s Jack Reacher, but both of these series has a bedrock of characters and worlds that keep the readers coming back for more. Yes, there are some more bizarre, food-related (and otherwise) type “hooks” out there in the mystery world, but enough exist that you as readers ought to be able to find a series you can get into. Once you do, take good care to see what within the story keeps your interest.

These are the three main writing lessons I’ve come away with after reading The Cat Who Played Post Office. And yes, I would recommend this book (or series) to anyone looking to get some enjoyment out of their reading. While it probably won’t cause you to make a deep reappraisal of your world and society, it still should give you some good ideas for how to become a more popular author.

Up next in this experiment I turn to an author who I have sorely neglected for some time, and hope to begin rectifying this by reading what is considered his best work: Vonnegut's Slaughterhouse Five. Stay tuned for the next exciting installment in my year of living (actually reading) fictionally.
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2016 Election

2/20/2016

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The presidential election is pretty hard to ignore, as it’s taking up all the space in the media these days with speculation about who is going to win the primaries. Two months in, the field has narrowed considerably and all those GOP hopefuls (and uh, Martin O’Malley) who thought they had a shot with those strong 1% poll numbers have been dropping like flies. Readers of this blog who have followed my writing on these matters know I have been no stranger to long political rants about the current system and its lack of choice for voters. I more or less swore off the political analysis in the wake of the 2012 major party conventions, witnessing them to be no more than tired propaganda factories reflecting the current sad realities facing our vox populi.

That bug hasn’t left me entirely, and when I started this blog I did say I would write about this stuff occasionally. The funny thing about being laid off from a cushy office job is that you no longer have time to read over all the depressing news in the world. It’s gotten so bad that I have become one of those Americans who almost solely gets their news from The Daily Show, and even that platform I had problems with up until Trevor Noah gave it the comedic kickstart it desperately needed. I have found this is not such a bad thing, as following the dreck of disinformation pouring out of the major news outlets is hardly the best use of one’s time these days.
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If you’re reading this I assume you’re familiar with the state of affairs up to this point, but I will give a pithy summary nonetheless: Bernie Sanders accelerated over on Hilary’s left flank, pointing out her very real contradictions in taking gigantic amounts of Wall Street cash (just like her husband) and attracting a wave of support for the simple action of not sounding like the bought and paid for candidates of the Democratic Party’s past. And on the GOP side, the clown car began last summer exceedingly full of candidates who didn’t have a chance in hell of scoring the nomination, and one guy who fell into that category who might wind up winning anyways. I might find some hate thrown my way for writing this, but to me there’s no denying that Trump is an ideal mirror of our society and its pathetic attempts at creating “democracy” in the day and age of the Deep State and the endless “War on Terror.” For in Trump we see all the aspects that the moneyed class worships: a “self-made” man that was basically born rich and allowed to fail multiple times without consequence. And yet at the same time he uses his talents against the establishment by braying certain code words to the GOP base, many of whom thought Dubya and his torture regime were way too liberal.

While we have a ways to go in this here contest, the important lesson here is to not count out the underdogs. What the establishment media still does not understand is that things are looking especially bad out there in this day and age. We are eight years into the economic “recovery,” having seen the majority of economic gains soar right up to the .001%, and those jobs that have been created are of the vastly menial variety. We’ve hit peak malaise in this nation, as reflected by the two outsider candidates, but it’s your humble author’s opinion that only one of them has a platform up to the challenge. I suppose that’s reinforced by Trump’s inability to articulate what he would do if he gained the most powerful position in our government, but then again he’s only reflecting another disposition of those in his class, which is to do do whatever they want without worrying about the aftermath. The 2008 economic crash (which I’d wager maybe about a quarter of Americans to this day even fully understand) proved this point on a massive scale.

Which brings me to the ultimate point, and that would be the one of voting. Is there a point to this action, which we are told every four years will really make a difference? It’s hard to advance an argument in the affirmative when people like Sheldon Adelson are attempting to use their billions of corrupt dollars denying the rights of millions of people. I can only speak from personal experience, having jumped on the bandwagon in voting for Obama in ‘08 only to be too ashamed to pull the lever for the drone-assassin-in-chief a mere four years later (I made my choice for the Green Party candidate, who was arrested the day before - yay democracy!). It’s just hard for me to say go out there and vote in the general election because it literally will do nothing for you these days. The vastly more important work is out there on the streets, because if you haven’t noticed our nation is literally crumbling before us, both on a societal and infrastructure scale. So go out there and vote if you desire, but if you want to truly make a difference start agitating your local governments and ask them why they don’t feel #blacklivesmatter, or start bothering them about disinvesting from companies that profit from the destruction of our environment. Or check out the increasing agitation against horrendous Supreme Court decisions like Citizens United and begin calling for a Constitutional amendment banning money from our political process.


Because when it comes down to it, our lovely democratic system has actually become a system of oppression, set up to create the illusion of choice. Sure it can be changed, but that’s going to take a hell of a lot more than voting in the 2016 election.
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The Old Man and the Sea

2/12/2016

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It’s time for another update on my year-long experiment in living (actually reading) fictionally. For those of you following along at home, the first book I tackled was Oscar Wilde’s fascinating 19th century novel The Picture of Dorian Gray. Next up is Ernest Hemingway’s Pulitzer Prize-winning 1952 novel The Old Man and the Sea.

Having not read much of any Hemingway outside of For Whom The Bell Tolls, which was based off his experience in the Spanish Civil War, I was past due to catch up with his better-known material. My wife encouraged me to read this as it’s one of her favorite books, and I can definitely see why. Hemingway was known for his tight sentence structure and there is no better example of such writing than this novel. Once again I don’t want to spend much time on the plot or influence of this book but let it suffice that this is a book about struggle. Struggle against that major goal in your life, struggle against your own personal demons, or struggle against some external force. The pure brilliance of the novel is that by keeping the story simple, Hemingway allows each reader to take away whatever he or she can regarding their own life. This helps lead into the first major writing lesson I found in this work.

First: Keep it simple. This adage is quite familiar to those who have read Hemingway’s work for years, but it especially rings true in this book. It can be said that not a whole lot happens in this novel, but what matters is how it is told. Through the simple language the reader feels they are right next to the fisherman in his boat, witnessing his travails in hooking the marlin and his strife in fighting off the sharks that attack it once it has been killed. Similarly, the author brings you right inside the internal and external monologues of the main character Santiago as we witness the conflicts roiling his soul in his attempt to land the biggest fish of his life. This is a writing technique that I hadn’t really considered and is one I hope to possibly use in the future. Hemingway had me hooked from the first pages of this novel, and I read with rapt attention all the way through the ending, which does not disappoint but offers a bold shot of illumination as I considered this book through the prism of life itself. This brings me to the next huge lesson as a writer I pulled from this book.

Second: Using a novel to tell a deeper truth about life. Hemingway’s final published work has been analyzed to death and read by countless children and adults who have found their own meaning in the fisherman’s battle to hook the marlin. All I can really speak to here is what I took away from the story, which is that each one of us has our own “marlin” in our lives that we are constantly pursuing. How many of us have sought a goal such as this and caught up to it, only to find “sharks” arrive to tear and drag away the carcass? Due to a lack of preparation, Santiago finds he has very limited tools to help him both keep the line going and fight off the sharks as they try to steal his prize. How many of us have felt the same disappointment in ourselves that he did, vowing to do better next time? The sheer force of the elementary language causes us to view this story as a metaphor for our own lives, and is written in such a manner that anyone can take away a parable that fits their own struggles. That is a major accomplishment for any writer, and proved without a doubt this man deserved the Nobel Prize in Literature the year after he published the work that would draw him international renown.

As with Wilde’s novel, this is another one I would highly recommend for any writer who wants to see a near-perfect example of the use of language to tell a deeply complex story. Once again we can learn volumes through the text itself, and while Hemingway was no stranger to offering advice to other writers, it is through his own work that we can learn the most.

Up next on the agenda for my year of living fictionally: Lillian Jackson Braun’s The Cat Who Played Post Office. Or as my wife would put it, an example of “reading for pleasure” and a forcible ingestion of a type of genre book I would normally never take a second look at. Of course, this was before my time working at a bookstore and learning about the value of various niches. Stay tuned for another essay on that book as we carry on - and as always feel free to toss me your own recommendations for later in the year.
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Why write? (Part 2)

2/6/2016

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(Part one of this essay involved the more superficial reasons of “why to write.” In this next part, I will attempt to dig even deeper into the reasoning behind our creative impulses and how to harness them for your art.)

In the first part we looked at how to take events and actions and scenes from your own life and see the story value in them. But how do we even come up with such things in the first place? As I wrote in the last part, ultimately this decision will have to come from your own heart, just as our life experiences don't match up very well. But in a way, isn’t that exactly the point? You ought to be able to describe your dreams and desires much better than I could, and are the only one who can view deep into the well of ideas within yourself. So how do we access this part of ourselves: the one that seems a mystery even to us, the observer of our internal life? To briefly return to the more superficial part of all this, it needs to be a clear signal from your subconscious that can also be turned into a good yarn. Returning to my first novel, Our Senior Year, the signals from my subconscious were the feelings I was experiencing during that year of my life. But I wouldn’t have had anything without a proper story. Therefore I had to add other aspects to the story, either by repurposing other things that happened in my high school days or even making stuff up. You can do the same thing - just hone in on a strong memory from your life. What were you feeling at that time? Can it be expressed through the written word? If so, get that part down first, and then see what’s missing. This can be done in myriad other ways, but I’ve found that if you harness a good idea from your life first, it can lead to the rest.

For as Picasso supposedly said, “art is the lie that lets us see the truth.” At the end of the day this is what you should hope to accomplish with your art: creating an excellent lie that lets the world see your inner truth. This could be the simple truth about growing up in a small town, dealing with its high school residents, and your religious family, as it was for me. Or it could deal with your own set of specific circumstances. Remember, this is your best asset. Nobody has lived your life before, and nobody will since. Draw from the most volatile of your own experiences to get the best results. I’m not saying any of this will be easy, of course. Putting your own personal pain and misery on paper for the world to see isn’t a smooth prospect even for the best of us. I anguished over what people from my hometown and family would think before I published that first book. But I don’t worry about that anymore, because I created a falsity that told a truth about myself and the universe of a small town. As long as you are being true to yourself and your story, you shouldn’t give a damn in the world what anyone else thinks about it. (Ok, you’ll have to care about what some people think, like your editor, but that’s a ways down the road.)

If that doesn’t work, you can go more abstract or less. A simple look around you may suffice. Can you tell a story about the people you see near you, or your apartment, or your home, or your neighborhood? Or if you want to go more granular, consider your deepest held beliefs and principles, and try to puzzle out why they exist. If you think this country is messed up and going adrift from the intent of its founders, try to gauge why you feel that way. Is it because our democracy is failing? Is it because people are apathetic? Write an essay corralling your feelings that may be of use in a larger story. If you have feelings for another but you are ashamed or afraid of them for whatever reason, try to figure out how they are holding you back and put it into words of your own choosing. We are getting more in the territory of dealing with the overall picture of life here, but any writer worth their salt can tell you this is the center of the “why write” question.

“Write what you know” is a platitude worthy of being ignored if you think you can, but there is a reason it has stuck around for this long. And that’s because it works. It works because it’s so simple. What do you know? Think about the thousands of answers to that question, any one of which could lead you down a rabbit hole into a story idea you didn’t even think was hanging out among the inner recesses of your subconscious. Or maybe it’s sitting right there in the open, waiting for you to understand how well you know it. This could be your feelings for another person, the way you view your occupation through the prism of the current society, or how you deal with setbacks and advances in your own life. The point is, only you know how you’re going to react to these things, and therefore only you will know where the story lies. And if it’s not in that particular thought, move on to the next one until you find it.


This second part of the essay is rambling into esoteric territory, so I’m going to leave the topic alone for now. I hope that you have found a bit of guidance into the “why” of writing through these posts, but if you didn’t please know that what works for one writer won’t always work for another. At the end of the day all I can hope to accomplish is helping others locate what I have found within myself that allows me to press forward with my writing. The “why” for me is easy: I have found what I’m meant to do with my life, and now comes the hard part of refining it and trying to find a modicum of success. But in order to figure out that big “why” we must first locate the initial “why:” why we sit down to pour our hearts and thoughts out onto the page in the first place. Once you discern that within yourself, you’ll be ready to start creating stories.
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The Picture of Dorian Gray

1/29/2016

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Those of you following this blog in 2016 know about my year-long experiment in living (actually reading) fictionally. This is off to a grand start as I’ve finished the first book on my reading list: Oscar Wilde’s seminal (and only) novel, The Picture of Dorian Gray. While I could spend the majority of this essay expounding on the literary shattering of the 19th century social consciousness that this incredible piece of work affected, this operation is more geared toward taking away writing skills from each book I read.

So regarding the novel itself I’ll keep it brief. This was absolutely one of the best books I’ve ever read. Considered a “philosophical novel” it is all of that plus much more; a daring look at aestheticism in the age of Victorian prudishness, it also contains one of the more remarkable examples of early science fiction writing as a play on the Faust legend of selling one’s soul to the devil. Except in this case Wilde does the story one better in that Dorian Gray’s soul has been transferred to a portrait, which keeps track of every malady and malfeasance he accomplishes while his own face retains its youthful luster. For those who have yet to read this marvelous work I won’t give away too much of the plot other than to say it will keep you hooked straight through to the end.

Now I want to move on to the takeaways from writing I gathered from reading this amazing book. But first a quick aside: I’ve written before about how rather unnecessary all those “how to write” lists and columns from authors have become to me. Instead of looking at those, I have maintained that the best way to learn from an author better than yourself is to simply read their work. That should teach you everything you need to know about how to improve. And in this case, that comes through in spades.

First: The adage of “show, don’t tell,” and its purported usefulness. This mantra is spouted to almost every writer attempting to make a go of it, and for the most part it is valuable, if pithy advice. Yet Wilde almost entirely ignores this in his novel. While the literature is a pure joy to engage with, and is a valuable critique of his own society at a time when that was frowned upon, just as interesting to me as a writer is what he doesn’t say. We are right there with Dorian Gray as he finds out the horrible secret of his portrait, but not necessarily when he goes on to a life of debauchery and hedonism outside of a full chapter on his interests in tapestries, jewels, and other expensive tastes. In a later scene in the book, Gray blackmails a scientist friend of his into performing a horrific act that will eliminate some evidence. These two are mentioned as having been good friends until Gray’s sullen reputation causes them to never see each other again. Not mentioned is the actual incident, or what Gray uses to blackmail his friend. Long stretches of time pass with barely a mention, and you have to pay close attention to see what point of the story has been reached in each chapter. To me, this would appear to go against the “show, don’t tell” rule, but in fact is an excellent example of how to elude things like this in the service of telling a story. For up until reading this book, in my mind the most sacred of golden calves in the writing world was description: make sure your reader knows what’s going on by showing him or her, and making sure they get the full measure of your scenes and characters. Wilde turns that on its head by consciously avoiding a lot of the headier parts of the story in favor of letting his audience consider what Gray is up to during the intervening chapters. While this probably comes as little surprise to more advanced literary readers, to me it was a quiet revolution in my style of writing, and one I suspect will be attached for some time.

Second: The use of the novel to speak volumes about one’s society. As is pretty well known, English society didn’t care much for Mr. Wilde or his supposed improprieties. Despite being one of the most brilliant minds of the nineteenth century, he was cast aside by his peers for daring to criticize his contemporary culture and its vagaries and norms. Seeing this in the twenty-first century, it’s easy to recognize just how important it is to use art in this regard. Those of you who have known me for a while understand my obsession with politics and the situation our lovely world finds itself in these days. In fact, the bizarre qualities of our modern life (escape of accountability by politicians, rampant corruption in the financial sector, devastating poverty for the vast majority) are things I hope to target in my third novel. So it’s very motivating to read such an incredible analysis of Wilde’s own day in his text, just to see how well to do it. This is seen no better than in Lord Henry Wotton, friend of Dorian Gray and a supposedly bad influence on him who leads him to a lifestyle of ruin. And how does he accomplish this? By urging his young companion to engage in art with all of his senses, and to live for the moment in any way he can. This type of lifestyle was unheard of in 19th century England at the time and caused mass opprobrium against Wilde that could culminate in him being put on trial for various obscenities a few years later. Sadly, as is too often the case with many great literary authors, Wilde obtained a more fair scrutiny after his death. But the legacy of his work reflected a sea change in the notion of what a novel, and art in general, could and should be.

These are the two biggest lessons I’ve learned from reading this marvelous work, but you out there may draw different conclusions. That’s why I would strongly urge anyone to pick up this book if you haven’t read it yet. And I would highly recommend it for those of you trying to figure out your own writing voice, as it’s a great example of how to write exceedingly well. (And if you’re looking for further recommendations, I posted my own set of favorite fiction books last year.)

Next up on the docket for my year of living fictionally: a change in the lineup, as my wife really wanted to read Hemingway’s The Old Man and the Sea together (much like we read To Kill a Mockingbird a few years ago - and yes, we are married dorks). It’s a relatively slim volume I’m ashamed to admit having never read, and shouldn’t knock me too far off course from the list I created earlier.


And of course, those of you out there are always free to send me your own recommendations. I’ve received a few great ideas so far, but can always use more. Now it’s on to the next book!​
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